I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms Komor.
Friday, 30 May 2014
Koko Samoa
Here is a drawing about koko. Koko is a traditional drink that islanders drink.
Basic Facts
Here is a drawing that I have made for my basic facts.Please leave a comment to help me approve on my work.
Wednesday, 28 May 2014
How samoa first got fire
Here is a drawing that I have created about Samoa and how they got fire.Please leave a comment to help my approve my work.
Monday, 26 May 2014
My Writing Goals
Here is my Writing goals that I need to work on . Please leave a comment to help me approve on my work.
Samoan Language Week
Here is a drawing that I have made about Samoa. Please leave a comment to help me approve with my learning.
Thursday, 15 May 2014
Earthquakes
Here is an Presentation about Earthquakes.Please leave a comment to help me approve on my work.
Wednesday, 14 May 2014
Gravity
Here is a drawing that I have made about Gravity.There is also a Gravity Poem on there written by Mr.R.
Please leave a comment to help me approve on my work.
Monday, 12 May 2014
Good Mates doc
NAME: Gary
START WRITING HERE - (TRUST) Good Mates
“Good Morning Everyone” “Do you want to know how to be a good friend?” Well if you listen up very carefully then soon you’ll succeed.
First a good friend has to show that he’s trustworthy and others can trust you, you can achieve this by…
Always sticking up for your friend when they are in need and helping when their work is to hard for them.
(Encourage)
Secondly a good friend also has to encourage his friends to do the right thing ,because if you don’t remind to encourage them, they could get into some serious trouble and you wouldn’t want that would you???
(Play/Fun)
Then a good friend has to show that he/she is playful enough to get some energy pumped in he/she’s body that way you’ll know that their up and ready to go.
(Manners)
Also a good friend has to show manners when talking, because if you forget your manners your friends wouldn’t want to be your friends.
Good Mates Poem
There’s good mates and bad mates sorry to keep you waiting mates,Cheap skates and wet mates. The ones that keep you waiting mates.Hard mates and fighting mates Witty and exciting mates. Mates you want to hug and mates you want to clout. One’s that get you into trouble and ones that get you out.
Here is my self-assessment.
Ideas:
I gave myself a:
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Because:
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R4
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I can write a lot of ideas that are thoughtful.
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Structure and Language:
I gave myself a:
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Because:
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R4
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- I can use the right structure for the purpose of my writing (one well developed piece of the structure with other not quite clear enough)
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Organisation:
I gave myself a:
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Because:
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R5
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- I can use paragraphs.
- I may only have one sentence in a paragraph or some of my paragraph breaks aren’t clear.
- My paragraphs may not flow, but that doesn’t interfere with my story.
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Punctuation:
I gave myself a:
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Because:
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R4
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I use capital letters for the start of my sentences.
- I use full stops/question marks/exclamation marks/ellipses correctly for most of my sentences.
- I use some other punctuation correctly.
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Sentence Structure:
I gave myself a:
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Because:
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R4
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Most of my sentences are correct.
- I use different types of sentences.
- My sentences vary in length.
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Vocabulary:
I gave myself a:
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Because:
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R4
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- I may use similes, metaphors and idioms to give my audience more information.
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Spelling
I gave myself a:
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Because:
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R4
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I can spell most everyday words correctly.
- I can use some spelling rules to write new words.
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Please leave a comment to help my approve in my work.
Jamal,Joe and Gary's Drawing
Here is a drawing that we have been learning about,it is about being cyber smart. Please leave a comment to help us approve in our work.
Multiplication
Here is a game that I have been playing to practice my Multiplication.
Please leave a comment to help me approve my work
Basic Facts
- 3 x 2=6
- 10 - 2=8
- 6 + 4=10
- 15 ÷ 3=5
- 4 + 6=10
- 4 x 4=16
- 10 + 10=20
- 11 - 3=8
- 9 + 4=13
- 3 ÷ 1=3
- 9 ÷ 1=9
- 5 x 15=
- 4 + 1=5
- 9 + 5=14
- 1 x 4=4
- 14 ÷ 2=7
- 3 x 5=15
- 2 + 4=6
- 8 - 1=7
- 20 ÷ 5=4 Here are my Basic Facts that I have been learning.Can you spot any errors?
Thursday, 8 May 2014
My goals
Here are my goals for this term, please leave feedback to help me achieve my goals
My Scientist and Inventor Drawing
Here is a drawing that I have made About Scientists and Inventors.
These are the words that I have been thinking of can you think of any more?????
Scientist Vs Inventor
Here is a google drawing that I have been working on, it is about Scientists and Inventors as you can see on the bottom I have wrote the definition of each person.Which one would you vote for Scientist or Inventor?
Please leave a comment to help me on my work.
Wednesday, 7 May 2014
My KWL
Here is a presentation about Scientists and Inventors.Can you think of any other questions?
Please leave feedback to help me on my learning.
T-rex fact
Here is a science fact that I have read it is about a T-rex,
one of the most scariest killer dinosaurs.
Please leave feedback to see more facts about dinosaurs.
My holidays
Here is a drawing about my holidays.Can you spot any mistakes????
What respect looks like
WALT:Identify what respect looks and feels like.Here are the answers that I have thinking of.Can you think of any more?????? Please leave a comment to help me on my work .
Tuesday, 6 May 2014
Suffixes and Prefixes
Here is a presentation of a activity that we have been learning this week.We have been learning about Prefixes and Suffixes.Please leave feedback or a comment to help me approve in my learning.
Monday, 5 May 2014
Maths Challenge
Today I finished my work quickly so I completed a Maths Challenge! Can you see any mistakes?
My Mihi
Here is my Mihi,my mihi tells me about me and my family.
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