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Wednesday, 22 July 2015

THE BIG REVEAL EXPERIENCE

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THE BIG REVEAL EXPERIENCE


First the teachers took their classes down to the dots to tell us what The Big Reveal was about.

I felt nervous and excited at the same time because it was the first time we ever had this event. I thought we were going to have a special assembly but I was wrong. Me and my friend had to sit this one out because we had broken bones.

We watched the whole school get into their athletic teams and go with the teachers to do some activities. There was heaps of activities to do, some were easy and some were hard. We were sitting until our teacher cam and gave us her phone to take some photos.

After that I saw my team go into the hall and do some sit ups. I saw many of them sweat and I knew they were working hard. I was really proud of them.

While we were walking we saw one of our teachers sweating and her face was cherry red. We were laughing and decided to take a photo of her.

Finally we all had to come back to the dots and reflect on what we did. I felt embarrassed because I didn’t do anything.

That was one of the best experiences ever.

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