Good Mates doc

NAME:   Gary

START WRITING HERE - (TRUST)       Good Mates

“Good Morning Everyone”  “Do you want to know how to be a good friend?” Well if you listen up very carefully then soon you’ll succeed.

First a good friend has to show that he’s trustworthy and others can trust you, you can achieve this by…

Always sticking up for your friend when they are in need and helping when their work is to hard for them.

(Encourage)

Secondly a  good friend also has to encourage his friends to do the right thing ,because if you don’t remind to encourage them, they could get into some serious trouble and you wouldn’t want that would you???

(Play/Fun)

Then a good friend has to show that he/she is playful enough to get some energy pumped in he/she’s body that way you’ll know that their up and ready to go.

(Manners)

Also a good friend  has to show manners when talking, because if you forget your manners your friends  wouldn’t want to be your friends.

Good Mates Poem

There’s good mates and bad mates sorry to keep you waiting mates,Cheap skates and wet mates. The ones that keep you waiting mates.Hard mates and fighting mates Witty and exciting mates. Mates you want to hug and mates you want to clout. One’s that get you into trouble and ones that get you out.

                                                               Here is my self-assessment.

Ideas:

I gave myself a:	Because:
R4	I can write a lot of ideas that are thoughtful.

Structure and Language:

I gave myself a:	Because:
R4	- I can use the right structure for the purpose of my writing (one well developed piece of the structure with other not quite clear enough)

Organisation:

I gave myself a:	Because:
R5	- I can use paragraphs. - I may only have one sentence in a paragraph or some of my paragraph breaks aren’t clear. - My paragraphs may not flow, but that doesn’t interfere with my story.

Punctuation:

I gave myself a:	Because:
R4	I use capital letters for the start of my sentences. - I use full stops/question marks/exclamation marks/ellipses correctly for most of my sentences. - I use some other punctuation correctly.

Sentence Structure:

I gave myself a:	Because:
R4	Most of my sentences are correct. - I use different types of sentences. - My sentences vary in length.

Vocabulary:

I gave myself a:	Because:
R4	- I may  use similes, metaphors and idioms to give my audience more information.

Spelling

I gave myself a:	Because:
R4	I can spell most everyday words correctly. - I can use some spelling rules to write new words.

Here is a doc that I made.It is about being a good friend.

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