I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms Komor.
Hey Gary.I liked the way you used the word rotate.Keep it up Gary!!
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Hi Gary me kanye k so i like the way you gave in grate words about the sun good describing words Gary LOL (:o_o:)
Hey GaryI like how you put all the similes and adjectives on your sun Poetry from your adjectives and similes work.PEACE!
Hi Gary, I really like ALL your descriptive language that you've used. Keep it Up!
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Hey Gary.
I liked the way you used the word rotate.
Keep it up Gary!!
Hi Gary,
I like the way you used the word sizzling I like it now im Hungry because of your work. Keep it up
Hi Gary me kanye k so i like the way you gave in grate words about the sun good describing words Gary LOL (:o_o:)
Hey Gary
I like how you put all the similes and adjectives on your sun Poetry from your adjectives and similes work.
PEACE!
Hi Gary, I really like ALL your descriptive language that you've used.
Keep it Up!
good job gary keep going
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